2022雅思外教写作范文#56:澳洲学生专业选择比较(含音频)

10多年来，喜欢吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福一直把中文教得很好。 图标由他的家猫在这里分享他原创雅思创作晾衣架的各范文配音。 用同名的公众号“英语考试Cat”你好。 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。

今天，给您我原创的雅思bar chart小作文范文。

往常的规则，以下是正文目录。 1、主题2、Mac范文3、范文朗读4、范文解析

上题： thechartbelowcontainsinformationprovidedbyaustralia ' stertiaryinstitutionsaboutthepercentageofmaleandfemalestudentswhoents . summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant。

-朗读- Model Answer高分范文-

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Overall，thesubjectofengineeringwasdominatedbymalesmorethananyothersubject； whereas，femalesmadeupthebulkoftheartsandhumanitiesmajors。

engineeringsawthelargestdisparitybetweenthegenders，with nearly 19 % ofallmalestudentsmatriculatinginthismajor， whilefemalescomposedonly2% ofthetotalfemalestudentbodyenrolling.conversely， majorsintheartsandhumanitiesdepartmentswereoverwhelminglyenrolledinbyfemales、 almostsittingatparitywiththepercentageofmalesinengineering.mathandscience、 andaccountingandeconomicswerealsopredominatelycomposedofmalesandwerefairlyequaltothenumberstudyingintheartsandhumanities， allsittingaround 12-14 %.computingwasalsodominatedbymalestudents，sanding at10 % and was6% higherthanthefigurefortheirfemalemalts

thelargestfemalemajorityoutofallsubjectswasinhealth，whereby 15 % offemalesoptedtostudythissubject， while only4% ofmalesdecideduponthissubjectastheirmajor.femalesalsoregisteredhigherinbusinessstudieswith8% makingthistheirforfor

- Essay Analysis范文分析-

标准任务1 phrases雅思小作文地道表达积累：

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